Initial Audience Feedback
We took our shots and came back to the classroom, we sat around a table and had the pictures uploaded onto the big screen in front of us all and we gave our opinions of whats good and whats bad about the photos.
My class mates looked at my initial shots and gave me feedback on whats good about the photos and also what improvements could of been made.
The feedback i got was i needed better composition and also needed to work on my Mise En Scene, with this negative feedback i am able to improve on future shots.
Here are a few of my first shots! ...
In this shot its the top left of the photo that spoils it with the object that has nothing to do with the purpose of the shot, the location is in a library so you would never know it was for a school magazine, also the choice of clothes in the shot was poor as it could be a teacher in a suit not a pupil admiring the school's memorial.
In this shot its the top left of the photo that spoils it with the object that has nothing to do with the purpose of the shot, the location is in a library so you would never know it was for a school magazine, also the choice of clothes in the shot was poor as it could be a teacher in a suit not a pupil admiring the school's memorial.
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